Take a walk through my world, look around you. What do you see? More faces than even Rainman could count and more pedal stools than Earth could carry. The sky is a turbulent manifesto of my emotions, no sun is ever existent, and rain is unknown. All paths are unpaved, are they the least taken or just want you to believe that the are? DON'T TRIP! Too many eyes are watching you, waiting for a mistake. There are ponds devoid of fish, and a world devoid of twins. WARNING: If you move too fast dizziness can occur.1
Too late for that one, eh? There, someplace to sit and get something refreshing to drink! No waiters or cooks or prices, just walk in and cook what you want. The kitchen in chaos looks more like a petting zoo than a place to cook. Chickens walk by with signs that say 'Nuggets', 'fried', Cows say 'steak' and 'hamburger'; pigs 'pork' and 'bacon'; calves 'veal'. Suddenly your're not so hungry anymore, with all those eyes on you. DON'T TRIP too many eyes are watching you, waiting for a mistake. Just sit on your pedal stool, you're say there, or so you think. Just close your eyes and pretend you never came.2
Author notes
I am not sure how to explain this...or any notes. Don't be offended if you are a twin I guess.
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This is really strange, I am not sure I understand what you are trying to say. That said the mood of this piece was set up really well. Good job, good luck in the contest!
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teenage choice
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This really gives me a lot to think about, and I can definately relate to "DON'T TRIP"... The whole thing actually just makes you sick with the world doesn't it? And wanting some place to sit and be safe from everything around you that is wrong... Very very cool, even if you can't explain it it makes sense.
jannin
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