My Wish

Looking up at the sky the other night I thought of him. There were no lights on as I walked up from the barn. It looked as if I could see every star in the sky and the moon shone bright over the hill. I stared up at the sky and wished with all my heart I could hold him in my arms. Look into his sweet hazel eyes and let him know with mine that I'm here for him. 1

If I could hold him and tell him it was going to be ok maybe it would be but my wish will probably never come true. Yet everytime I look up at the night sky and see a star streaking bright in it's last attempt to shed some light on the world as it goes out, I wish for it to all be ok for him and I.

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  • SageSyren Greeters member
    March 31, 2008

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    I know this say you aren't done, but it is a good wish and I am closing the contest and judging it. Thanks for entering and good luck.
    Brooke