Trust

TRUST. Trust is the biggest word I know.1

TRUST. Trust is the scariest word I know.2

TRUST. Trust is the loudest word I know.3

TRUST. Trust is the hardest word I know.4

TRUST. Trust is the most easily broken word I know.5

TRUST. Trust is the most fragile word I know.

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Not really I poem, but maybe it is. *shrugs*

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  • Poems are all about words so I trust this one is

    I have to admit with almost all the statements here (but then, the scariest word for me might be "FIRED" right now, hahahahhaa).

    Trust is so hard to bestow, and yet so easy to break... I am reminded of a friendship I had at work, and in a span of weeks, TRUST was *that* easy to damage. Maybe the friendship was not as deep at most relationships should be, but yeah... that's beside the point.

    Thanks for sharing this with us =)

  • Not a poem but cool

    Its true. but I would deleate the 2nd trust in each line.


  • Lawliet
    April 24

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    yep.... yep yep yep. Trust is a funny thing ^_^ Hard to gain, easy to lose...

  • its kinda a poem

    good job its really good...


  • Ted E Bare
    April 4

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    I think you have pegged many descriptions of the word. I think it is one that many people choose not to know the true meaning for it takes a great deal of work and a very high degree of honesty to make that word stay alive; trust! I always allow a person to have my trust and then if they give me a reason to take it away from them, then it has to be re-earned and not very easily may I add! Nicely done.

    Ted E


    • SageSyren Greeters member
      April 4
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      See I trust too easily also. It's been my downfall in alot of relationships. My husband has no trust in me and I stay home all day. How can you not trust me??? Oh well, its him and not me I have to remember that.

      Thanks for reading and for leaving a comment.
      Hope you get rain soon
      Brooke


  • SeleneStone gold member
    March 31

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    So very true, indeed. It takes me awhile to really trust in people and once I do if they break it. It takes even longer for me to ever gain it back and sometimes depending on the situation it's nearly impossible. Well done Brooke
    ~Joann


    • SageSyren Greeters member
      March 31

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      Thanks Joann for stopping by and reading. This was just running through my head one night when my hubby and I were having are weekly trust fight.
      Thanks again
      Brooke

  • daftweejimmy gold member
    March 25

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    Simple concept written simply; where's the line that says trust is the most faithful word I know? Or is that too optimistic?


    • SageSyren Greeters member
      March 26
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      To optimistic for me But it's a good one.
      Thanks for reading
      Brooke


  • Abstract Muse gold member
    March 25

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    Each line rings so true here.

    Trust is a big word for it has different inner meanings to different people.

    We all wish we could give it freely but are afraid it will be broken in the end. Once shattered it is hard to piece back together.

    Greg


  • Amicus2K8
    March 25

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    Everything is a poem...smiles

    Somewhere in my deep dark past, I realized that an absolute truism, once spoken, permitted perusal that the opposite of that 'truism' also assumes the quality of truth....saying that, trust might be view as the easiest word and easiest thing to have, just openly and freely 'give' oneself to the warmth and comfort of 'trust' and love, with out a second thought or a look backwards...

    I never seem to leave an easy comment do I?

    such a deal...

    amicus...



    • SageSyren Greeters member
      March 25
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      No you don't, but that's what we love about you

      You are right though. Trust can be the easiest treasure given. For myself, last night at least, trust wasn't something I was giving.

      Thanks for reading and commenting.
      Brooke


  • Anaya Roma silver member
    March 25

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    TRUE!

    Yes. It is. I understand.
    Suggestion: In line 5 I'd say Trust is the most easily broken word I know.

    Anaya Roma

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