[ Dear cruel and incessant one,1 ]

Dear cruel and incessant one,1

Do you dare to risk the chance
Of sacrificing yourself
To someone who might very well
fulfill your long lost want?2

Do you dare to take the risk,
For love and lust,
And which haunts every step that you take
Once you've fallen into its open arms?3

Do you wish to destroy your life
With words that you may not exchange
When time runs out,
When I have re-arranged my thoughts?4

Do you understand the Complexity of
What We need?
what We want?
Do you wish to silence your intuition
By believing what I have to say?....

Author notes

i was listening to a song and it reminded me of an earlier emotion, so i decided to revisit it. in case u didnt pick up onit the situation was indecision. =/

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  • Darianxuuhhhxduh
    May 1, 2008
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    Beautiful.

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  • Blessed Blasphemy
    March 28, 2008

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    Is this about wanting to be in love but too scared to embrace it and terrified to give your heart to a single person?


  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    March 23, 2008

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    I don't care what you said earlier, this does not suck at all. i love every line of it. Its truely an amazing write. I wonder how long ago this was? Thanks for entering and good luck in teh contest. Thanks for sharing =)