Emotionless

For you, my love, my freind, my life.1

Why do i feel this way....numb.2

No feeling anymore, just numb.3

Happiness seems a lifetime away, i wish for a break. It never comes. It never did.4

I love, i need, i cry...just like you.5

I want, i yearn, i cry again. Just like you.6

You get given this so called life... to live,7

Why was i given this... why me.8

Just having to deal with the hurt, the pain, 9

rips me up knowing control is out of reach.10

Like a bomb, i wait to explode. They don't see. 11

He wont see.12

Wake up... I'm dying here, notice my face.13

See past these eyes and notice my life, my pain, me.14

Not thinking you can see past this, knowing you have too,15

Why call it a heart, all it does is beat, it has nothing left.16

Look inside of you, I'm human, just like you.17

I'm crying, trying to love you, trying to stay alive in this relationship we call ours. 18

My hands are cold, my head is frozen, my life stops still.19

I'm numb from this, tearing the life left sour, 20

Feelings of such grief, while you sleep.21

Wishing this heart would mend, filling with your gratefulness that I'm here, still here, while you sleep.22

Will it always be like this, a heart dead to the world and all its glory.23

It cant see, it cant breathe, all it sees is you.24

You and the hurt i must live with, i smile, it freezes.25

Slowly slipping away from this love, i pray u wake.26

I feel just like you.27

I breathe just like you.28

I hurt just like you.29

I'm awake, in this so called relationship..... i wish you were too. 30

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  • DarlingStac
    January 24, 2005
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    wow! that was great... i loved it..great great job..it was so sweet... and i hope that he wakes up to see what a great person you are.. great job...thanks for the comment on my poem...love stac


  • January 8, 2005
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    That was REALLY great!!
    hope thing work out for you
    keep up the great work

  • flamesofrage13
    January 7, 2005
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    This is really good, it's something most people have felt at one time or another. I hope things work out for you

  • xCrushOnYoux
    December 21, 2004
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    awesome!!

    i loved this poem it was very good!! i wish you good luvk with your relationship!!

    xo0ox*Janelle*xo0o0ox

  • NikKisBeBeMonKey
    December 20, 2004
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    I'm numb from this, tearing the life left sour,
    Feelings of such grief, while you sleep.
    I love this....
    i am sorry you are goign threw what ever you are going threw i hope it gets better very fast. i loved ur poem.
    xoxo!britt


  • stolen fairy
    December 17, 2004
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    oh lordy how much can i relate to this right now... it is uncanny. we're probably not going through the same stuff, but every word you wrote touches me. thank you for sharing yourself here and good luck in your relationship...
    ~tara

  • Eyes like ice
    December 16, 2004
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    so true. just a shame he doesnt know how it is your feeling. i'l be here for you as long as you need me. Dont ever forget that, OK.

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