More Then Friends

What would you do if I told you that I wanted to be more then friends with you. 1

What would you do if I told you I just wanted to whole you kiss you and make love to you.2

We can be friends and lovers you knew me more then I knew you.3

We are so much a like has so much incommode why not go for it.4

What would you do if I told you that I think of you each day and night and in my mind I have dream I have made love to you over a thousand times and each time it gets more and more better.5

I knew we both has lost so much still has pain and you are afraid to be more then friends but I too has lost so much and we have help each other through it all and I just want to give it a change.6


What would you do if I told you that I wanted to be more then friends with you. We can be friends and lovers or if not we will still be friends and I will still love you as much as you love me.7

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  • Crying Angel Eyes
    May 5, 2008
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    I no what you feel i have been there done that... and am in that situation...


  • Mieta
    April 2, 2008

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    Fiz told me about this. Wow...this is strong and emotional and it takes a lot of courage to come out and say it. It also takes a lot of courage for the 2nd man to get out of that shell


  • Fizbop
    March 22, 2008

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    whomever this is for wow the feelings in it are quite brilliant and very much and your quite good at conveying the message for that person.


  • checkmate-
    March 22, 2008
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    Wow! This is really good. Keep up the good work!


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    March 22, 2008
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    I FEEL YOU THROUGH AND THROUGH, i ask myself the same question every minute of the day... it never stops, i cant just get over it...it not that easy, brilliant poem... i think I would connect more seemings i know this person.. i think lol

    fucking awesome..im crying but it is awsum

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