Decisions

Decisions1

All around us2

People decide3

What should i wear?4

What will I be?5

But no one6

Knows how hard7

This decision is.8

Decisions9

Mine is10

One of love11

The man12

I had always seen13

Myself with14

Is drifting15

Far16

Far away17

And a new one18

Wants to take19

His place20

Decisions21

Which am I22

To choose23

My Prince24

Or will it be25

The Fool26

My Prince27

He is kind28

When he wants29

To be30

And cares31

When he wants to32

But33

He is becoming34

More and more35

Evil as the years36

Tick by37

The Fool38

The horrible39

Tactless40

Pranking41

Loyal42

Loving 43

Fool44

He is kind45

To most46

Except my Prince47

He is conceited48

But then 49

What man isn't50

Decisions51

My Prince52

Is more distant53

He does not approve54

Of our friendship55

Being so open56

The Fool and his friend57

Are now toturing my Prince58

Decisions59

He told me60

Never to help61

But I can't62

Sit here and watch63

He called me64

Something horrible65

He has made66

My decision for me67

He has come to apoligize68

Decisions69

Always they are70

Hard to make71

Should i forgive him72

No he is to far gone73

I am sorry Prince74

I cannot forgive your75

Transgressions76

Just so you know77

If you hadn't strayed78

From lights path79

If you had stayed80

The way you were81

When you were younger82

When i first met you83

My decision84

Would have been different85

a/n:so i used as you can hopefully tell the love triangle option and the poetry option if you got emotional about it i did not intend that

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  • Choppy, needs commas, doesn't flow all that well. Also you need to capitalzie a few of your Is. The ideas good, the poem could use a little work.

  • That was unique.
    Don't forget that capitalization of "I" is important.