So you try to turn the tables around
Say that love was found
Yes it was and always will be
Try to pace yourself
When what is next
Maybe that was part of the dream
Try to figure it out
When you know there is something left
How the hell do you see whats right
Baby tell me this tonight
How do you do it with me to
I find it hard not to feel guilty
When All I wanna do is make you proud
Make you smile
Make you laugh and cry
Stand only by your side
Cu's somebody told me
I was your girlfriend
Who's much like your boyfriend
This all started February of this year
It wasn't confidential
It might have potential
I'm not rushing around
I Don't want something new
I haven't even though of anything but you
Since I made this mess of mine
I 'll work it all out
And I know we'll be alright
Cu's baby were close in the a time like this
I said baby lets talk cause those lips I want to kiss
Well somebody told me
He had a girlfriend
And you are my boyfriend
Starting from November of last year
Were something quite special
So much potential
blushing, and mucking around
I said brace yourself for me
I screamed baby , baby please
Well we'll just go now
Cause all we wanna do it...
Well some thing just tells me
You just compel me
And Ive never had a love so strong
Can't tell me I'm wrong
Together- were rushing around
In a list
honest opinions
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CREATIVE WOMAN:
I remember the days when we used to sing to this song with a bottle of coke on ice and dancing around the bedroom. Now this seems more like a song to sing in joy of the bedroom times if you catch my drift
WELL DONE
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Another great poem and intresting additon to my contest. This is really uniqe and a very good poem
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oh, right, i just realized that these were lyrics, but anyway, it is really good. you've got such writing talent! haha
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so sweet and awesome =D
ily
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This was very vell done and written.
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Nice
Even though they were lyrics and took me a few tries to get down what you were talking about... It was a really good piece. Well done. (though I like my steak medium rare)
DarkOne -
Once again a wonderful piece. I liked how you altered the lyrics of this song affectively to fit your purposes. You also kept the fast pace of this song and managed to get the right words to fit the feeling of it well. Good work.
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I think Fiz wanted a story for the contest...the song posted in the contest page to be made into a story..not another song but its good none the less...I was thinking over entering..I'm just not sure..what I'd write.
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