In the end
You have won me through
Through sickness and health
we will get through 1
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Why did you go and lie
why did you have to try
Why do I even bother loving you
It does not make sense
Living with forgiveness
what do I have to do2
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Forgive me one
For what I have done
For the tears I cried for you
I kept so strong
I'll move along
I need you by my side
Forever more
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Maybe I was wrong
Maybe I will move along
I just cant seem to let go
I know its wrong
My love was strong
Now I just don't know
We were meant to be friends
You have her
Be happy
I am sure3
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I will give you my ring
As the pendant of love
Treasure you forever
Through all and above
I know you forgive me for what I have done
I know you know there is another one
As there is for you
But hear me now
Don't ask how
Just know no one can ever acquaint to the love I have for you
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I think I made it quit clear...
you might have to loves, or lovers or think your in love with someone when really you just want to see them happy and protected...
But when it comes it comes...
You know when you really love someone, because at the end of the day; you can and will always take that final bullet for them no matter what...
I know ive made mistakes
I still am crossing the line with mistakes.
But I love Ben... I could never ever not... I .. I don't even wanna think about not loving him...Cause we were two broken people.. and while he had mike... I knew that I had heloed him to.. he saved my life; time and time again... he was more than just a night in shining armour... he was my king, and I his queen.... something that you just cannot describe... yet you know it is there and has and will always be... forever more...
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Forgive me one
For what I have done
For the tears I cried for you
I kept so strong
I'll move along
I need you by my side
Forever more
This was obviously the time you were trying to find your feet with Neal and Ben. I assume as such from the previous comments and we all know the end of the story to this... which is intersting and I wondered if you might to a follow up: because in the end..you all went your sperate ways....
♣ Blake
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Looks like a bettter presentation for your prevous poem. I fell that this is very well done and very well written.
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Oh wow..this was really wow..LOL...This is really putting things forward. It is easy to read and relatable. Love is something you obviously want to fight for with Ben and I wil Neal...Hopefully things work out on your side as well as I think they are on mine.
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