When April bursts anew 1
and bright birds swoop and call 2
far away the summer day, 3
farther yet mellow fall; 4
t'will come, and winter too. 5
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Gather the four winds free 7
whistle around the hearth 8
look within, your close kin 9
content with joy and warmth. 10
Come away; come with me. 11
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Come where the wide world waits 13
with beckoning roads and 14
twisting streams; come, your dreams 15
of lofty sail, white sand. 16
Come while it still awaits. 17
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That siren song so clear 19
calls forth at every turn; 20
rising, falling, calling, 21
reaching out for those who yearn. 22
Come away. Can you hear? 23
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This road leads to this 25
and that stream rivers there: 26
Mystery, Unity, 27
Diversity, then where? 28
T'will come, and not remiss.29
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Please tell me what you think
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You really do capture my attention with these poems in such a delicat yet beautifull way... ypu provok questions, you ask for meanings and for me myself it makes me ask things wonder, ponder, ofter drfiting me away from my otherwise sadistic mind..like a hiatus
Come where the wide world waits
with beckoning roads and
twisting streams; come, your dreams
It is very important to have dreams
and I think the voyag of discovery is a unique an amazing thing
blair
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This was beautiful.
I love how this poem just captures the road of life. I could have interpreted that wrong but that's just how it felt to me.
The last stanza was my favorite. it was just so beautiful and left me breathless.
are you ever going to publish your poetry?
you should
xoxo
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Adventure, hopes and dreams to uncover something entrancing down a stream or around a mystical turn. Screams of magic and the wanting of something new and adventourus.
This is like a dream made worded, I would want to go along this path with you and find new things in these seasons, no matter how deadly a Sirens Song be.
Keep up this magical sense.
My fave yet (:
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Beautiful & somewhat magical. I liked all the metaphors & allusions in it. Awesome!
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This was a beautiful poem. It had a lot of meaning, and it was very powerful. The stanza structure was interesting too (A, B, C-C, B, A). Well-written! Great job; thanks for referring me to it
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This was another lovely poem and it was so full of.....I'm not sure, it had a sort of magical quality about it that was very different to your 'Spring', which definately added to the piece.
I think this was as beautiful as that, you definately have a talent for expressive poetry.
Yet again, well done!
~Mirry xx
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Lol, you made me yearn to follow you
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Thank you...
Nice to see you out and about from aloha land...anything new for me to read?
ami...
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