Just hold the door open for me
And hopefully I'll watch the same thing happen to me.
You taste much better with blood all over my lips.
I can feel you under my skin
I can feel your pulse
your heart beat
The petrified blood your skin left exposed.
I can finally see through the lies
see the horror in your beautiful eyes.
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Thoughts.Thoughts.Thoughs.
so?
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Amazing Chris! Honestly! x
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I think the title is funny because i don't see how it fits with this awesome, cool poem! Maybe the title can be better if it was "Hold the Door Open." So people are ready to get instantly pulled into your poem. Awesome. Love it.
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hmmm what might those thoughts be.......
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thoughts?
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yea so?
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