Ch.1 The Wish ---Unknown Title

Here I am again stuck with my buddy's and there girls. Watching them have fun, while I sit back day dreaming about that special someone, wondering "when is she going to come." I get lost with the thought of her (although I can't see her) I hear my buddy's call my name " hey Eric!!! Come have a drink with us." My thoughts are interrupted and I will soon forget about her until next time.1

We had a couple of shots, till the manager said "It's closing time folks" we all pour out into the streets, stumbling just a little. I told my friends I will hang with them later, as I was walking home I looked up into the sky to see a shooting star "I wish I can find someone who will love me." As I watch the shooting star fade away, I walk stumbly home. I walk into the door, and slowly I just slide my back against it and just start to cry. I'll never find her!

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haha I know its short but its only the first chapter
if you have any title ideas let me know thanks

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