NAME: Norman Doe1
AGE: 302
D.O.B. 04-09-623
GENDER: MALE4
ETHNICITY: BLACK AMERICAN5
HAIR COLOR/STYLE: BLACK/ CURLEY6
EYE COLOR: BROWN7
HEIGHT: 6"FEET8
BUILD: MED TALL WITH BIG CHEST9
DISTINGUISH FEATURES: Has a tattoo of a tombstone on his upper right arm.10
PERSONALITY: calm and cool, mild temper, keeps to himself11
LIKES: playing the lottery12
DISLIKES: elderly and children being mistreated.13
WEAKNESS: women of course14
BACKGROUND: grew up in St. Louis, Mo. the only child to Barbara and James Doe. Honor sudent in high school. Married his high school sweet heart, they have two children one son(Cedric) and one daughter(Charnelle).15
Norman works for Hogan Truck Co. his wife is a nurse for a hospital.16
One day Norman was on his way to work when he heard something like a scream. He followed the scream, he came across a elderly woman getting her purse snatched away. Norman jumps out of his car, runs over to the scene and tackles the robber(beat him up very bad), takes out his cell phone and calls the police, when the police arrives they take the robber away. The old lady wants to give Norman a reward but, he tells her"No mam I was just doing my civil duty and I am a christain". He made sure that the old woman got home safely.
is this a good bio and short story.
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The bio was great and believable. It made me want to meet the character. The story was too short and unoriginal to catch reader interest though. Thanks for the entry.
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The bio was very believeable and I liked it, but to be honest, the short story was sort of boring. The plot was too typical; it was done by many other writers.
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