Pk War

Opening my eyes . . . its still there. There it was. The wizard and witch would not leave. I was hiding behind a bookshelf in the corner. 1

There was a war going on between wizards/witches and humans that didn't have magical abilities. People like me, knowns as Pks, were right in the middle. Pks were partly human and partly magic. They were pyschic and each pk had 1 element. i was the pk of darkness. Some pks hid their abilities and sided with the humans but some pks showed their abilities and sided with the wizards2

I was sided with the humans and i didn't show my abilities to people that was why i was hiding. I was in an abandoned house when the wizard and witch busted.3

I ran to the corner and shrouded myself in shadows. I was so nervous. My breathing was getting heavier and my heart was beating faster.4

I was allergic to dust so it wasn't so good that i was hiding in a dusty house. 5

My nose was starting to get irritated and i could my wanting to sneeze.6

I tried to stop it but it kept coming. My nose was so irritated and i couldn't stop it anymore. "Hah, hah, choo!"7

I gulped and the wizards and witches shot their looks at me. My shadows had come off when i sneezed so they could see me clearly.8

I had to think of something and quick. I didn't really like humans so i said, "I am a pk and i am on your side. see."9

I made a ball of shadows and threw it in the air. I twirled it on my finger and then they said, "K, we believe you but why were you hiding."10

"Um, . . ., i thought you were humans when you barged in. Im sorry." I replied nervously.11

The wizard spoke, "i see." The witch nodded and smiled. The two of them went back to their conversation so i left them be.12

I decided to explore the house. There wasn't much there except for a black cat.13

The black cat started at me and meowed. I blinked and wandered off.14

'My name is Lukas Yukin and i am a pk if you haven't figured that out yet. i am in between the war of witches and wizards vs. humans. after a decade the witches and wizards destroyed the humans.' was the blurb on the back of my biography after i published it.

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  • Payne
    November 4, 2008
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    Wow

    This was a good story i mean i felt the tention when you made the witch and then you ran away and the black cat i mean this was a pretty good story in general it could have been better if it was longer and had a better plot but all in all i liked it so please make more stories and dont let this comment unencourage you to make stories keep makin more !!!

  • Jinxgirl
    March 27, 2008

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    interesting... this seems like a lot of summary in places rather than showing an actual scene. very interesting idea and story start though.

  • V l
    March 17, 2008

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    Withes and wizaeds vs. humans my god if you had vampires in this I would have scream this is very good.


  • Flutluvzbobby
    March 17, 2008
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    It was awesome!

    My favorite part was the 2nd Paragraph!Keep writing!You r very talented!


  • Jemasia gold member
    March 17, 2008
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    I like it!

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