It is time,
For you to go,
Why, I don't know.1
You just left me there,
Left me stranded,
Alone in the world.2
No friends,
No family,
I have no one.3
Did you know,
That this would cause me,
No end of grief?4
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
I thought I could almost cry with its simplicty yet its awarness to such a grief striken sadness.. bravo~ emotion well captured....
~blair~
-
-
thank you blair.
-
-
Short and very much to the point. I can really feel the sadness and pain in this one
~Joann
-
-
I've started to feel a little better, isn't that great?
-
-
I think that is great that you're feeling better now
-
-
-
You spelt grief wrong. Just to let you know.
anyways, is this how you feel? i hope not. It's really sad. Good piece tho.
KEEP.WRITING.
-Melli<33 -
-
this is how I feel, but life is getting better for me.
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
