Tigers can't change their stripes

A small recognition and then I'm free to follow the crowd
But I'm still chained to the same opinion.
Maybe I should stop trying so hard to fit in.
Fitting in never seemed so easy.
But I swear I'm nothing like you.
I swear I'll never turn out to be like you.
I swear: just like those pathetic promises you broke.
How dare you call them pathetic?
Your the reason I fall, every time I try to pick myself up.
I blame you for what I see in my own reflection.
I turned out to be like you.
A second generation of forgotten unnecessity.
And when your heart turns into a miserable metaphor
You'll know what it feels like to be a mystery.
You'll know what it feels like to be me.

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  • Your Anything
    March 16, 2008
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    So

    I think its probably one of the best one of yours I've seen.


  • forevermyangel14
    March 16, 2008

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    a second generation of forgotten unnecessity
    and when your heart turns into a miserable metaphor= AMAZING lines


  • Fervent-Author
    March 16, 2008

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    oooh!! I like it! This is good Chris, so descriptive and it voices your thoughts so well, I loved it. good job!