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Author notes

These are characters from my other stories. Ry is from "Light and Dark," and Starling, (and Pippis and Typhani) are from "Mars Magic."

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  • IrishYndina Greeters member
    March 29, 2008

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    You definitely picked my favorite contest to borrow from! I hope it helped you learn something about your characters...and that you had a little fun with it! Thanks for entering!


  • Red Hot
    March 21, 2008

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    Nice short story. I wish you good luck in the contest that you entered this in. I enjoyed reading this. Keep on writing and take care!

    -Red Hot-


  • Fizbop
    March 16, 2008

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    Very nice story i really like this i think it's a fantassic story I was hopeing for more but alas there wasn't so I hope you work on this some more and post more of it.


  • Melli
    March 16, 2008
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    Hmmm, idk. it was ok.