NOT AN EMBARRASSMENT

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There was a girl. A beautiful girl who was shunned because she was different. But there was two people she could trust, her best friend and her mother. This girl went to counseling because she had a bad past and everything came back to haunt her. Her mother didn't take her to counseling one day. She asked why. "Because it's embarrassing to have my child in counseling and knowing something is wrong with her," her mother said. "Well, what's wrong with me?" she asked. "So many things." her mother said quietly.2

But isn't it ironic? It's her mother's fault. She was the one who created the bad past. And now she thinks her daughter is an embarrassment. 3

This is dedicated to a girl. A beautiful girl who did nothing wrong. I want her to know that I will always love her. I want her to know that I will always be here for her. I want her to know that she IS NOT AND EMBARRASSMENT!4

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  • Co-Co-Cola
    June 27, 2005
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    Geez...this is very cool.
    Like sunless said, you shouldn't have to answer how it was the mother's fault...it jsut makes me think of imaginative way s that it could be her fault. I must really feel sucky to have this problem...I'm glad my mom loves me...(I hope O.O)

  • daisy-dream
    January 5, 2005
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    Ok I guess

    Good story - a bit confusing - how is it the mothers fault? Maybe you could try and explain that a bit more - but otherwise cool but watch out for the typos - good one.
    ~daz

  • sunless
    December 19, 2004
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    wow..... i don't think you need to answer how it was the mother's fault, that part of it makes you think... i love this story, i've been to counsuling.... it wasn't much fun...
    i agree with the person above me... that girl is extremly lucky she has someone like you in her life.
    cat~

  • Demon God
    December 12, 2004
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    Hmm..how is it the mother's fault? Perhaps a bit more elaboration would be nice, though I myself adjusted it to my own mind's situation. I'm not going to counseling, took a bit but I convinced my mom that I didn't need it. I feel some guilt for lying to her, but that's just because I don't want her to know, I'm afraid that I will embarrass her...that I'll upset her with what I'm keeping to myself...yeah. This was well written, and that girl is lucky to have you care so much about her. [This is..real..right?] Lovely story.