Darkness swirls,
through crisp air,
cold air.1
I have no one,
No one has me,
I am alone.2
People pass by me,
I have not another look,
they just continue walking.3
I'm a nobody,
I'm a freak,
That's what people say.4
I have problems,
No one understands,
They don't care.5
I'll be always alone,
Having no one,
For eternity.6
I am no where,
In a world,
known as EverLost.
Author notes
pretty much how my life is... Hell.
A contest entry
- Poems and Stories by MixedUpFreak.
170 points, ended March 20, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ive been here so many times and knows the feeling.. well written things will get better.. love that pic..has to be one of my favs ^.^
love blair
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It's people like you who help me get better. thank you.
-Avan
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It's so very sad. but really good and well written. good job and keep it up.
KEEP.WRITING.
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thanks. I will keep writing.
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This poem is so sad and I can actually relate to feeling this way sometimes. Sending you big hugs.
This is a very well written poem.
~Joann
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Thanks for the hugs. I'm starting to feel a bit better now.
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Alot under the word limit but i really liked it
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thanks.
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Sad words, I felt the need to reach out. Life will not always be this way...usually is when you are in your teens...it will pass. Freak is a strong word, yet I suppose this empty feeling makes the feeling of being one true. Well expressed, things will get better, thanks for sharing
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thank you. I need someone to reach out to me.
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Awwwwwwww!
You really need a hug I'm sorry you feel like this... I empathize you... Depression is not fun at all... 
This though, was a beautiful poem and I hope you see happier ones from you, dearest Evangeline Please start feeling better...
Sincerely,
Ana
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I'll try to feel better. I'm already starting to a little.
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Life can get better...even if you think its crap
This poem is well written, but seriously stop thinking so negativly. Life can be shit...I kno but the trick is to find something to distract u from crap. I don't want to sound like a parent but you shud try going back to skool. It gives you time to think, and though it can be awful it gives order into your life...useful when ur home life is all over the place. I don't like skool (mostly bcos of problems caused by myself, but neway) but I go to feel as if Im doing something. I realize that to fufill my dreams I have to go...that's life! Ur a good writer and like it or not aid skool u can get a career frm writing.
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I'll try to feel a little better, and people here on the site have helped a lot.
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This poem is very beautiful Avan. Love the imagery. It seems so sad, but it's beautifully written. This is how I've felt a lot for awhile. Everything gets better with time, though. Keep penning and cheer up. Everything will turn out okay.
Ice
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thank u. I've needed someone to tell me that for a long time. *smiles again*
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hehe, don't worry. and hey, if u ever need someone to talk to i log in everyday. I'll be around some time or another.
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I'll probably be on tommorow. It's my b-day 2moro. I'll turn 15.
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