A power has the earth
Stir the soul
A call rises
An echo in the night1
Bring forth your soul
Hear the call
Mist covers the ground
The power grows2
The grass is rustled
By the voice of the earth
The cry of song
Of those long gone3
Be peace, sweet peace
Employ of us
To bring the hope
To grow the change4
And the pipe and flute
Eerily call
Their voice all
Beauty immortal5
Hear, the sound
Lifts the soul
To the ground is given
The spirits’ essence6
The beat, the song
Clear and strong
A call, a cry
All will hear7
Revives the soul
Heals all broken
Power eternal
Word ever spoken8
Cry of power
Lead the way
To life
To Earth
A contest entry
- Poetry!!!! Poetry!!! Poetry!!!! by LadyLionnir.
400 points, ended March 21, 2008, 19 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Oh, I'm normally not one for poetry, but i can feel the "radiance" of power. Short and beautiful.
Kinda sounds like song to be sung by Gaia! (mother nature at her best!!! -
There was a beautiful flow and strong, deep meaning!! I love the flute part and all the descriptions you led me through!! It reminded me of that book I was reading. Well-written imagery and all that jazz. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!
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Very uplifting postitive words , with a good message strung within. I like the last two verses, they ring so true with positive vibe. Well done, thanks for sharing
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