I Want to Be...


I want to be astronaut and travel into space.1

I'll fly there in my rocket ship to find a Martian place!2

I want to be a cowboy, way out in the West.3

I'll ride my horse all day and night, in my hat and boots and vest!4

I want to be a rock star and sing a song or two.5

I'll dance on stage and sing real loud, and sing one just for you!6

I want to be a pet doctor and help your pets get better.7

When they're home and well again, they'll send a thank you letter!8

I want to be a scientist and study lots of things...9

things that bite, things that swim, and maybe things with wings!10

I want to be a handsome prince and save the maidens fair.11

I'll slay the dragon with my sword and build a castle there!12

There are many things I want to be. They all sound like fun.13

But I think right now, all I want is to play out in the sun!14

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My first attempt at children's literature.

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  • missymoo20
    April 19, 2008
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    kool it was good


  • lottiemae
    April 11, 2008

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    Very Impressive

    I like this little poem. You can rhym real well. good reading, and very good imagination. keep up the good work.

  • Insanity RainRue
    March 15, 2008

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    Inspirational writing.
    It made me think:
    Wow, we can always change our minds at what we want to be, what we want to do, who we'd want to be later in our lives.
    And maybe we can go for all those things (well, maybe not ALL but some)
    And it inspires me, because maybe the character is open-minded
    And has a very huge imagination!
    Good poetry, and your rhyming. Lol.


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    March 14, 2008

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    How fun. Don't we all want to be those things. The other day my eldest daughter said she wanted to work with animals and then said something about space. I told her she could work with animals in space. She laughed
    Brooke