[ My fingers ]

My fingers
From the tips of our lips
Tracing inside
Down our curves
caressing us slowly
Touching
Feeling
As you sense my needs
You tease
Responding in a sensual manner
pinching slowly
Breaking apart my breaths
Holding
Tasting your every inch in my mind
Faster in motion
I titillate your desire
Hungry we become
Interwoven as one
How long we have waited for this day
My fingers
Leaving us both sated
My eyes watered with exhaustion
Love in its simplicity
How we needed that today

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Just a quick poem of expression : The one will know what I am talking about

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23

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    ♣ Blake

    WTF HITMAN???
    Man does not appreciate good poetry...

    This was beautiful Blair and sexualy enticing...I love how you really delve deep inside your poems. Such sensuality lays within these words.

    You are beautiful poet when you take the time to just share and not speed, rush... I admire you lovely...

    ♣ Blake


  • whichcraft Greeters member
    March 15

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    I think this is a hot poem but you should categorize it so young eyes don't accidentally see this and your picture. Without a categorization on your submission, the system will not block these types of entries from innocent eyes. Please consider doing this. Otherwise, the poem is very good and descriptive.

    Jenn
    Greeter


  • HitmanShah
    March 14
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    it was kind of stupid and i didn't like it. sorry but being honest


  • Fizbop Greeters member
    March 14

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    very wonderful poem it's got a great feel to it. The flow is wonderful and works well with the words you have chosen.