David paced his back yard angrily walking in a circle. "What are you doing little bro." Said the voice from his brother Kyle. David fell to the ground.1
"I'm thinking!" He yelled pissed off that he got scared.2
"About what?" Kyle asked coking his head to the side.3
"About our author that's what! I hate her she has made my life miserable. First she kills off my real family, and now... Well now I'm forced to be brothers with you." He continued on yelling. Kyle chuckled and offered him a hand. "I can do it myself." he mumbled and stood up by himself.4
"Personally I love our author. I mean I'm the comic relief when every one else are being all mopey and stuff. Wait a minute I get it your jealous of me!" His eyes widened in understanding and David's eyes looked horror struck.5
"Like I would be jealous of you, and this is interrupting me for my planning. There has to be a way to get rid of her." he continued pacing again.6
"Be careful what you say remember she can hear you. Your ending can always be revised." Kyle pointed his finger and with that he walked away.7
A storm rolled in covering the blue Sky into a blackened oasis. David looked up as he felt a lonely drop of rain slid down his cheek. Thunder sounded in the distance and he open his mouth wide in horror. "Oh no kyle might be right" he shouted running for the door. "I'm sorry!" he yelled over and over again as he went into the house. Thunder boomed louder like laughter in the distance. Then like magic the rain stopped and the sky cleared again.8
"So have any thing to say for your self" Kyle said looking out the window. He was talking to the shivering David hiding in the corner of the kitchen.9
"Yep!" David said after a moment of silence. "Never anger the person who controls your life!"
A contest entry
- What do your characters think of you??? by EphemeralStyle.
350 points, ended March 25, 12 entries
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Comments
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Lmao!! I haven't seen an entry where the author actually participates as a character. An interesting spin on things

I also like that one of the characters was the 'author's pet' while the other was all agry-like
Awesome ^^
Eph -
Good job!




