Did you ever wonder

Did you ever wonder
what kind of mother I will be
If we had a bundle of joy
what kind of parents would we be
Do you think we would raise it right
Do you think it would love or hate us
Would you cry looking into its eyes
and smile at something we created
Something so magical and beautiful
would it hold us together
Make us stronger
Did you ever think we might end up like them
End up like our parents who were never really there
I couldn't bare the thought
Of bringing a child into this world under those circumstances
Yet, I think about it all the time
Close my eyes
I wonder will my baby love me
Will I be the mother they deserve
I think about you
I love how you are with me
Would you be the perfect father for my baby
For our baby
Right now my life has only just began
But you cant help wondering
Just what it would be like
To have someone made for the two of us
A little angel with parts of us inside and out
Did you ever wonder what it be like
To hold our newborn baby in your arms.

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  • CeliaBby
    June 1

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    awww this is cute. It sounds, like, you're wondering what it would be like, being a mother, to hold a newborn baby in your arms.. xD cute picture too it OOBER awesome girl!


  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23, 2008

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    ♣ Blake

    Close my eyes
    I wonder will my baby love me
    Will I be the mother they deserve
    I think about you
    I love how you are with me

    Blair you astound me somtimes.
    You are so beautiful
    you provoke som much talent in everything you write.
    And this peice is just so darn lovely I am in tears

    (Boyz dont cry)

    ♣ Blake


  • Seachelle
    March 15, 2008

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    I love the idea behind the poem because it's so motherly and beautiful.. I just wished it rhymed and flowed better. Then again, I do know not all poems rhyme, but I am definately biased towards those that do, lol. I still liked this and that picture up top is absolutely adorable... You express the true imporatnce of bringing a child into the world with someone special. It's sad how many parents could care less... Anyway, I love you outlook and keep writing
    Ana


  • Shah Z
    March 14, 2008
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    beautiful poem, your not so scary after all. nice picture by the way


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    March 14, 2008

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    Awwww how sweet and such an adorable photo!Smile I use to wonder that once before with my ex boyfriend. Amazing the things one can sit and think of sometimes isn't it? This is a very cute poem and I think a lot of people could relate to this feeling.

    ~Joann 

  • V l
    March 13, 2008
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    Great what if pome like story and love the Photo cute.


  • Fizbop
    March 13, 2008

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    Nicely done. This is a perfeected flow to it. The questions of what if and what not aked to a spacific person. this is just very wonderful.


  • Siby Anan
    March 13, 2008
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    By the way, LOVE the picture. SO adorable :]

  • Siby Anan
    March 13, 2008

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    So many questions, and can relate to so many people.
    Not me, though. I'm afraid of babies XD

    Such a beautifully composed piece of work. Dreamlike, sort of. Something you would think of in your free time that would keep you wondering until the moment it comes true.


  • LadyLionnir
    March 13, 2008

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    Wow. Deep and imaginative, but real. I can't relate to this, lol, but I've heard it from a lot of people! Cute picture, and a beautiful way to put your questions!


  • emperess27
    March 13, 2008

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    You know, I often wondered this about my boyfriend. I think this is an amazing poem, well done. Kais =)

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