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I sat on the toilet, though I still had my pants on, and stared at the hall pass. It was the hall pass for Ms. Zamra, who was the accelerated spanish teacher. I had went to the bathroom in this period yestderday too.(by the way, its 5th period, I just came back from lunch) And the 8th grade had spanish after we did. The person who went after me yesterday really seemed to have payed attention to the hall pass. She had put her first name down and doodled all over it. Arielle...I knew that name. It was just weird. Just weird...2
"hey, whoevers in there, can I use the bathroom?" a voice called into my stall. I suddenly remembered I was in the bathroom and shot up to open the door. "oh, hi Vick" It was my friend in 7th grade. We high-fived and I went out of the room. 3
Goddamn I dont even want to talk about spanish. I sit right by the door so i dont really litsen to anything except whats happening outside. We had a 'game' of tic tac toe with spanish words. I got in trouble for refusing to go. Realllly sucked. 4
We stay in the same room, room 44, for Lal. Our teacher, Mrs. Lockheart, can't say a scentence without saying the punctuation in it. it gets annoying. 5
"Okay kids comma today we are going to lean about personification comma similies comma and metaphors period" She said as she walked to her desk. Seriously, thats how she talks. I got out my 5-subject Lal notebook and headed a new page. She passed out the new grammar books that the school bought this year, and told us to do 2 whole pages, and if we diddnt finish them, it was for homework. I ran through some of my favorite songs in my head, I do that alot, kinda of like a personal walkman. The work, well, I had the whole weekend. I just litsened until the ring for elective came.6
Elective was just across the hall, with my social studies teacher, Mrs. Wallingson. I never liked that elective, Community Service. We never did anything. I sat in the back and watched as the kids drew gigantic flowers for the 'Donation Tree'. Once I finally tuned everyone out, we had to go back to homeroom. I grudginly got up, grabbed my books, and started down the hallway. 7
As I was approaching homeroom I saw her again! The 8th grade chick who I swear I know! This time she stared into my eyes and wispered a faint 'hi'. As I looked back questionly, she exhaled and walked away. For some reason, that brightened my spirits. Well, the spagettii dinner was tonight too. The day before, Me, Ken, and Cory helped roll meatballs and we started a meatball fight in the school kitchen!!! It was so much fun, and I had this weird gut feeling that the dinner itself would be alot of fun too...8
Author notes
kee! chapter 2! next chapter will have THE SPAGETTI DINNER
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Wallingson, Zamra, Lockheart... lol I may as well just go ahead and assume that this is from Richie's point of view... and how would you know that he sat on the toilet with his pants on? Hmmm... very odd... but okay this is pretty good; I think you could have done better but you conveyed your message pretty well. By the way, does he really have Mrs. "Wallingson" for his elective? I don't know who in their right mind would actually want another period with her. Then again, I guess he and the plaid shirt elf accomplice are not in their right minds anyway lol. I'll read some more later...
Grace -
i love the lockhart part ..okay kids comma lol i love that teacher
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Okay...more into the story now!!!!
This is good....the only suggestion I have is the fact that you wrote this more like you were writing a note to ur friend instead of a story, but also I liek this because it's yoour voice. Don't change it. It's good. It kinda threw me for a loop for a second there, but now I realize that I like it...yeah I'm weird...GOOD JOB!!!
XoXo
NiKKi -
ok....lol....very good...its so funny how you changed our teachers names...lol...good job yo...lol.....*clap* *calp* *clap*...muhahaahahaaaa..nie job yo...
*huh*,
hehehehhh
nice job,
Noah.....ok..just kiddin
Kim..lol
