Recap of Recap of The Phoenix Wars: Prolog Extreme Rough Draft additional1
A dark purple from Njima surrounded him as he kept chanting inaudible words. A dark red appeared around Majmba. Brila’s color was dark blue and surrounded her as well. A transformation occurred and all the demons could do is stand and watch. They were powerless to move, some force was holding them back. Full body armor not of this time appeared onto the three warriors each the perspective colors that had surrounded them. Swords of a quality unseen in anytime appeared in their hands, along with shields. Each of them had a helmet with a feather of their color in it. The transformation had completed and the force holding the demons had released. 2
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Pharaoh Narmer had a very pleased look on his face; he then made a devilish grin. His plan was about to unfold exactly as he intended. When he saw the three phoenix warriors had changed from plain to looking all powerful looking. The Pharaoh’s face turned worried, what power did these warriors posses. He knew then he had to obtain this power for his own dark deeds. Little did he know that wouldn’t happen, nor would it ever happen. He demanded his demon army to attack them. The creatures drew up their scythes and charged at the warriors with a faster speed then they had presented before.4
The Phoenix Warriors stood steady, not one of them had a look of being worried. They drew their swords out of the sheath, and held them a defense fighting stance. People around them started to scatter out of fear of being squashed by the massive demons. Those that stood by the Warriors side would be remembered for their valiant stand. Though they would not last in the fight that ensued they fought with all their might. The three warriors backed them up with ten times the amount the final fifty people could muster. 5
The demons were shocked and disoriented never had they had foes that wouldn’t yield lightly nor would they be pushed over. The battle went on for what seemed to be days but only lasted four hours until the three Phoenix Warriors and three of Pharaoh Narmer’s army remained. A brief pause was observed by truly an act of god as a giant force field separated the warriors from the demons. The warriors carried each person that had died to their respective families and gave them a final word. The last body that remained was carried by all three of the warriors; a woman was the last of the people to stand. The Phoenix Warriors felt that this would give her an appropriate farewell. 6
Banging at the force field with their scythes it yielded not even a scratch or even a speck was made by the demonic creatures. The warriors resumed their fighting stance and the wall mysteriously vanished. As the wall vanished the demons charged again at the Phoenix warriors. This time the demons charged and felt no resistance at all. They easily defeated the Phoenix warriors. The warriors couldn’t move much and if they did it would be only in great pain. The Pharaoh had witness his triumph come true, his demons had beaten god’s best warriors.7
The creatures dragged the Phoenix Warriors to the Pharaoh. “Well well well, you put up an interesting fight. It’s unfortunate I have to make an example out of you three. Truly you would have been better off serving as my personal gaurds.” The Pharoah paused as he paused infront of the warriors. “So do you three have anything to say for yourselves before I pronounce your punishment.”8
The Phoenix Warriors replied in unison, “you may have defeated us but it was by gods will alone and not yours. There will come a time when we will rise from the flames to fight for what’s right and what’s good.”9
Pharaoh Narmer didn’t even want to reply to that. “You will be mummified alive. So that no one in my land will dare question me ever again.” He shouted to the people. The warriors were taken away to the new pyramid that was being built over the horizon. He told his men to mummify the warriors alive they refused. Pharaoh asked his demons to kill those men on the spot and they would have to perform it. They did as they were told and cut off the tongues of the warriors, and then wrapped them up in cloth gauze. They then scrambled the brains by inserted something up their nose. They could still see and feel. The warriors were then put into the sarcophaguses and sand was pilled on them. 10
The rein of Pharaoh Narmer only lasted three more years. The people revolted against him and he had no chips to bargain with Satan. The truth of the warriors even though they couldn’t be there came to be true. It would not be until the year 2025 when the tomb of the Phoenix Warriors would be revealed. 11
Author notes
Collaboration with Vl. Vl Came up with the name of the Phoenix Wars. I came up with the idea of venturing it into a story. We both take credit for this work.
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Comments
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All I got to say is bring on the Phoenix Wars.


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The Pharoah paused as he paseed infront of the warriors. “So do you three have anything to say for yourselves before I pronounce your punishment.”8
{PARAGRAPH EIGHT} mate , there ya go should fix it up aye... -
Well I read a good majority of this and I really enjoy it..It does get confusing for me sometimes, cause well we all know how blank I can be... But I love this..I mean how to you think up these plots.. I am intersted in really like knowing what inspires you, I know vl did, but what made it tick ^.^ EWWW nose..eww poor noses


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paseed ??? explain that lol... Other than that.. I haven't read any of your other work, but you have good langue in this peice and you seem to get that historical feel to it... I am into battle stories, and this one held my attention... 2025
sweet
~thanks a bunch~
Blake


