There is time and there is emotion; love, hatred, bitterness, pity, anger, joy, sorrow, remorse and forgiveness, and under these a soul which will either grow and become a part of the expanse of all things eternally or else shrivel and fade to nothingness. And I am, created, man.
Author notes
Jon Bautz, Male...I am my favorite songwriter..myspace.com/jobendsstrings (Daddy's Song is my favorite song of all time)
A contest entry
- Originality Wins by Taylor Renee.
355 points, ended March 21, 2008, 12 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Could you follow the story alright without getting bogged down in the narrative?
Comments
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Wow.
Well, it took me twice to get the full impact, but yeah, I still followed it okay. [Dunno if that was meant specifically for here, but whatever, lol.]
I really love this. Especially the vocabulary.
It made me really think. I love that.
And of course you followed all the rules, which is a great plus.
Great job!
Thank you so much for entering, and I wish you the best of luck!
xoxo
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Tay
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