Sitting in the void
of silence and wait,
I listen for your voice
In my quiet, peaceful state.1
Straining my ears
to hear what is said.
I prayed for a sign.
Then the skies turned red.2
Looking in awe
at this marvelous sight,
The wind overtook me
And the world became bright.3
I heard not a word
but sensed a new life.
A plan that would lead me.
An end to my strife.
A contest entry
- Poetry!!!! Poetry!!! Poetry!!!! by LadyLionnir.
400 points, ended March 21, 2008, 19 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - 1,000 Points for poetry!!! by Forgotten Anomaly.
1000 points, ended March 26, 2008, 58 entries
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200 points, ended April 18, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Congratulations on the gold throphy!!!!
this poem has amazing, beautiful language and it kept me glued to the screen in all its beauty and visons.
Coninue to inspire people.
Blake ♣
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Amazing! I love rhyming patterns and you made this flow very nicely. Very nice job, very beautiful! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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This flowed wonderfully, from beginning to end it flowed. Wonderful imagery and emotion. Overall perfection.
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Yes, I agree. It has an amazing flow to it and the words were beautiful, real, touchable. I could feel the emotion and the melancholy calmness. It said enough, in so few words. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
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Beautiful way to describe it all.
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good,
It's good to see some delicate poetry, there is alot of stuff going around that says far to much but still eludes telling any real story. This is a cool concept and it's done well, flows nicely
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