[ * She whispers ]

* She whispers
In the shadows
Her tears grey storm blue
She cries a hurricane
Of anger
Like the beauty
You see through
Like a pit full of domination
Like disguise between your lies
Will she ever just consume love
Instead of washed away goodbyes
She loves to kiss the winter
To watch loves butterflies*

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23

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    ♣ Blake

    This poem just chills me with its honest beauty babe... the picture compliments it so well: speechless I am.

    ♣ Blake

  • V l
    March 15
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    This was so sweat you are a born poet.


  • Siby Anan
    March 13
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    Such a bittersweet melody ^_^


  • ForgottenVoice silver member
    March 12

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    An amazing flow to the words. I love the way you describe something, with a small amount of words, but make it so deep. wow.
    *three clappy men*


  • DarkOneShadow silver member
    March 12
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    Very good

    Flowing and cool to the touch, but very honest and full of meaning... well done

    DarkOne


  • Fizbop Greeters member
    March 11

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    i sware your poems are getting better and better here blair . very nicely done and very well written. top notch

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