[ I try ]

I try
To be a better person
If not for them
But for myself
I am honest
I am open
I an accepting of everyone
No matter what - No matter who
I love
I care
I breath to make people happy
I make myself happy when they smile
When they laugh
When they say "You inspire me"
That's what life is about
Life is about living
To inspire
To create
To be who you are
To never let anyone tell you your wrong
To fight
To achieve
To reach your dreams
I try
I succeed

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23

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    ♣ Blake

    YOU GO GIRL
    you flaunt it

    PEOPLE Blair is one of the most beautiful, friendly, caring and kind person you will even meet.. and she proves it here... she is one of gods beauties.

    ♣ Blake


  • Siby Anan
    March 13

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    Preach it, baby!

    Well said! I must say this is one of the strongest pieces I've ever read.

    Fantastic! [I say that I lot xD]

    How's....brilliant? Yes, this piece is brilliant


  • Hermanator1 silver member
    March 12
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    well said

    I hope that others who might wonder who or what you are understand the message and respect that you exercize your beliefs as you see proper. Good too that you attempt to reach out to others as well as "being yourself". as you said, when ones tries one succeeds.


  • ForgottenVoice silver member
    March 12

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    this is truly an amazing poem. You obviously have a gift for poetry. Well, keep up the good work and all that jazz!
    -Ev


  • Delfishie
    March 12

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    Wow. You write positive poetry really well. I like this. Given the day I've had, it's really refreshing.

    One line bothered me a little, though:

    "If not for them
    But for myself"

    Wouldn't an if/than statement work better than an if/but? I guess it works your way, too, but the effect sort of jarred me out of the poem.

    Besides that one line, though, friggin awesome. I think it's great how you can write both positive and negative poetry with equal skill. Keep it up!

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