After Death(unfinished)

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"I never believed something like this would happen to me, something so chilling and earth shattering I'm afraid that if I close my eyes, my world will turn upside down. I never sleep, or eat. My life has become Hell. I have nowhere to escape this insanity. I may be in a room full of people, but I feel so utterly alone. I have no one..." Shayna looked around the room, seeing what people were going to say about her. Everyone remained quiet, although many cried.1

I remembered that moment so clearly, it was as if it was happening again. Shayna was lying in a coffin, just put into the ground. I walked over to the fresh grave, and thought to myself, Shayna was such a sweet girl. She may have had an edgy side, but doesn't everyone? I only wish someone could have told her about god, and how she was never truly alone.Fresh tears poured down my face. Shayna was gone.2

Before her death, I had been her counselor. She told me all about her life. She trusted me with everything. She never hid things from me, and she always came to me in her times in need. I can't believe she is actually gone. I walked away from her grave towards my car. A black 59 Chevy Convertable. I unlocked my car and got in.

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