no one knows

Locked up in a prison 1

or so it seems2

the only freedom i have is in my dreams3

no one cares or gives a damn4

no one even knows the truth or who i am5

no one sees the tears behind my smiling eyes6

no one knows the reality, no one knows the sorrow and lies7

no one can ever take this much pain8

no one knows the fear in the heart that this girl contains9

This girl cannot take it i struggle with the fear10

i dont want to lose him... the pain will be severe11

no one understands why this girl smiles or cries12

yet no one asks or to talk to me no one even tries13

i think it's how it works, or how it's ment to be... 14

to be with him for ever, then the pain will forever be15

Author notes

this is somethin i came up wid in the passed five minutes i guess it's alright... I think its about a girl who loves some one and they abuse her and she is scared to leave

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  • AnaisBlack
    December 11, 2004
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    I loovvveee your poems, Coco... I'm almost jealous(yea, whatever!) Keep it up!