[ *I cried so hard ]

*I cried so hard
Being someone there not
I'm far from darkness
And its all that Ive got *

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sometimes all you can say is I love you...and hope that whatever happens you will make it through.

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  • CeliaBby
    June 1

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    Short. Very beautiful for only four lines of words. I'm gussing this had to be based on something that happened to you. Even though it didn't rhyme, it was very pretty


  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23, 2008

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    NOW THIS IS WHAT I CAN SIMPLICITY IN ITS BEST.
    The picture was beautiful

    ♣ Blake


  • alreadyloveuforever
    March 12, 2008
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    true, well done


  • Fizbop
    March 11, 2008

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    Very dark and poetic you do have a way with words that makes you only a stronger writer. this is to the point

  • V l
    March 11, 2008
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    That is so ture well done.


  • Fizbop
    March 11, 2008
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    very true and very well said.

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