Kissing Her Goodbye [[♥]]

[[[[Note: This is in a guy's POV, even though I'm a girl, thank you.]]]] 1


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I brought her slender wrist to my face slowly, looking into her eyes. I delicately kissed the top of her hand, then picked my head up.8

I wiped a tear that fell from her eye, and whispered a promise into her ear. 9

"I will always love you..."10

She smiled up at me, then nodded her head.11

I let go of her and walked forward.12

Then I let Aiden embrace me, kissing my hair softly.13

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Author notes

Seven sentences.

Used one of your titles, too.

This is about a guy that was pretending he was straight, pretending he liked his gf like that, when really, he was gay :] The girl's really like his best friend, in my mind, but that's not really showed!

So anyway. I hope it was okay :]

I'm Taylor!

[I'm...dazzlingly different? =P]

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  karmaxandxcrayons
  March 24, 2008
  
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  I liked it!! And I think it would be AWESOME if you DID incorporate what you planned in the Author's Notes!! Keep it up and Good luck in the contest!!

  
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    Taylor Renee
    March 24, 2008
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    Thanks so much!
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  Paragonz Shadow
  March 19, 2008
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  Nice. Short but sweet...sort of sad too.
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  Seachelle
  March 15, 2008
  
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  Very interesting poem to write... I don't think I would have ever thought of this idea.. Great job for the originality... This is adorable... Seriously. The fact that the guy is playing is faux toward the girl is mean in a way, but you did a great job on the ending
  
  Ana

  
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  On.Cue
  March 12, 2008
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  Aww, that is so cute =}

  
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  Siby Anan
  March 11, 2008
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  Ooh! Nice work! Saddening, though. Nice concept!
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  djk0925
  March 11, 2008
  
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  Graet

  This was great Taylor! Nicely written and hold so much feeling. Well done