Her wolverine soul

Blair
One of my closest friends
My torture
Submissive to my needs
She breaths
Awaiting the cruel moment I strike
Just when it is not warranted
But only I can bring Blair to pain
Only I can be the domineering partner
See for when I take over
I am in charge
And anyone in my path will suffer
She is beauty
Darkness lives beneath her skin
In her soul
You could say she is the part of me
That makes me whole
That makes us one
For I am Blake
Her wolverine soul

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23

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    ♣ Blake

    AH I REMEMBER WHEN WE WROTE THIS TOGETHER.....

    LOVE YOU BABE ~ MY WOLFY ^.^

    ♣ Blake


  • Hermanator1 silver member
    March 15

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    Nice work

    It flows well and delivers the message clearly. I like the closing rhyme pattern as it adds a little punch that ties it together.


  • IGWooten
    March 13
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    Excellent!


  • sweet guy
    March 13
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    this is great, don't know what else to say about it. brillant


  • Fizbop Greeters member
    March 11

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    very intreegingly done. fantatsic job and very well written can't wait to see more of this darker stuff. Job well done blair


  • Narrissa Snow
    March 11
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    wicked!

    that was great i love it,


  • Bella-Cacciatore gold member
    March 10

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    oh neat! that is excellent!
    good work! it is very, whats the word...
    telling? very emotional.
    both are amazing inmy eyes also!


  • SeleneStone gold member
    March 10

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    This is such a cool poem! Wolverine soul oh my gosh I love that. Very revealing, heartfelt and honest poem. Blake and Blair are both amazing in my eyes

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