story of my life..

As darkness falls i shiver;
I don't know where im going
I stumble,
I get up and glance behind me
The twinkling lights of the city haunt me,
I have to get away.1


As twigs and leaves snap under my weight,
I listen to the sound of jerky breaths.2


Mine.3


Tears streek my face,
leaving a shiny silver trail, where they once traced their paths.4


As the light dissapears i feel comforted.5


I have to get away.6


I wipe the tears away annoyingly,
Fighting for control,
I stop to catch my breath7

Reaching the outerskirts of town, i look down at the specs of light,
I start walkng back to where i came from.
A place that supposed to be home. If only it was.8


I reach for the door,
It swings open.9


*gulp*10

"Where the HELL have you been?!"11

Story of my life..12

Author notes

nope no notes. just the story of my life. i take running as comfort.

this is my first piece, tell me what you think. be honest and dont sugar coat anything,please help me or give suggestions

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments

  • pruedence
    March 10, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Running without a plan, you go in circles. Good emotions flowing throughout your words, well expressed. thanks for sharing