As darkness falls i shiver;
I don't know where im going
I stumble,
I get up and glance behind me
The twinkling lights of the city haunt me,
I have to get away.1
As twigs and leaves snap under my weight,
I listen to the sound of jerky breaths.2
Mine.3
Tears streek my face,
leaving a shiny silver trail, where they once traced their paths.4
As the light dissapears i feel comforted.5
I have to get away.6
I wipe the tears away annoyingly,
Fighting for control,
I stop to catch my breath7
Reaching the outerskirts of town, i look down at the specs of light,
I start walkng back to where i came from.
A place that supposed to be home. If only it was.8
I reach for the door,
It swings open.9
*gulp*10
"Where the HELL have you been?!"11
Story of my life..12
this is my first piece, tell me what you think. be honest and dont sugar coat anything,
Comments
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well!
first let me know is this poem...
??? you know dear you have that fire inside you which can give a speed to your writting ,all you need is little bit polishing and constant writting habbit .
i am sure you will rock this piece is not bad ,sad ,gloomy but confusion is there about meaning .
keep writting and your writting will improve
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