The new house keeper. {to be a virgin or not to be.} part 1

"Hello. I am your new house keeper, Melody." Said a beautiful,skinny girl. She was a little shorter than me. She had jet black hair.Hot, full lips.She was wearing a formal looking black shirt,V-NECK. She had on tight white pants that showed off her round ass. She was perfect. It made me wonder what it would be like to grind on those sultry hips.To suck those perky,chilled nipples."Sir, hey, Im up here." She said. I guess I was staring at her tits. "Umm....Yes...Well I guess I am your employer. Your nothing that I exspected. Well why dont you come in? Ill show you your room."1

She nodded and follwed me as I lead her down the stairs to the basement, where she would have a corner to herself to sleep in."Nice car. 1994 camaro..." She opened the hood. "Yeahp..V8, 5.7 L, / GM 350 cid,NON TURBO, GAS ENGINE2

Roller cam, 2-bolt main, cast iron heads, SFI, block #327, head #320....I am in love!" She smiled as she closed the hood and looked back towards me."so how old are you,Melody?" I asked. I was curious of her age because I wanted to fuck her. If she was underage, which was common for 16 and 17 year olds to become house keepers, I wouldnt think of touching her. " I am 18. Turned it...ummm...two and a half weeks ago." She said. Right then, as if to tease me, she dropped her name tag. she bent down to pick it up, and when she did her pants became almost see-through. Red thong with white pants? Wow. Cocky bitch, huh?3

"Oh thats nice." I said staring intently. "Yeah it is. I am happy now because I can find a fuck buddy and have no shame doing it. You knowwww....you would be a perfect cantidate. You have nice mustles. Becautiful blue eyes. Your stalky.Nice ass. I bet your dicks big. Its already showing through your pants..." I looked down and blushed. "Oh dont be shy. I would love to suck it. Get it nice and wet. Then slowly slip it in my pussy. I know it will be nice and warm. You wouldnt be such a bad person to loose my virginity to." I couldnt believe what i was hearing. She walked closer to me and dropped her bags off of her shoulder. She kissed me hard and grabbed my dick through my pants. I moaned loudly as she unzipped them and pulled them to my ancles. She pulled down my boxers and stared,wide eyed, at my 7 1/2 inch dick.4

She smiled big and......
said "never mind. Im sorry. Ummm...what do you need cleaned."5

I was angry because of this...I pointed to a huge load of laundry and fixed my pants and struff. I walked upstairs and went to my room to indulge in some porn and jack off because the bitch did that.6

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  • Dragonbabyx3
    January 5

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    LMAO! That is awesome! I had to crack up at the ending! I couldnt stop laughing! That was really awesome! LOL. I loved it!


  • david18232
    April 30, 2008

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    COOL

    I LOVE IT WHEN THE STORY LEAVES YOU LIKE THAT. POOR GUY THOGHT HE WAS GOING TO GET SOME AND SHE TURNED OUT TO BE A TEASE. GOOD JOB AND YOU WERE VERY DESCRIPTIVE. I HOPE TO READ MORE IN THE FUTURE. KEEP ON WRITING.


  • nomadgirl
    March 20, 2008
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    tease! lol

    funny


  • Hermanator1 silver member
    March 18, 2008

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    Missed seeing your work

    Glad I jumped on your profile. So another "near reality" piece?
    I like the concept kind of a Lolita story but the girl is clearly a major manipulative piece of work. I like your themes but I thought the ending too abrupt and there was a weakness in the transition in the garage when she started to run her game. One problem you used "I" when You meant "she" and that threw things off.
    Will look forward to more and to your feedback.

    beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.

  • bananna
    March 12, 2008
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    haha nice

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