It’s like you don’t even care that I cry
For you and all the things you’ve done to me
You used to be
The one who’d come and comfort me
You’d build me up and dry those tears of fear
But I’m alone now
I’m stumbling and falling
Down this twisting, ever-turning road of life.
And I don’t know how long I can take it
Till I fall and end it all.1
Cuz when you leave you take a bit of me with you
Even if you don’t mean to
You’ll take me with you
And it’ll take some time to patch that hole
You left in my soul
And even then the scars’ll be left as reminders2
It’s so frustrating to hear all your lies
It’s weakening, crumbling, you’ll be its demise
And by listening to your silence
I know our friendship is fading and
No matter how long I struggle to stand
I’ll always be left waiting
For you. All for you.3
Cuz when you leave you take a bit of me with you
Even if you don’t mean to
You’ll take me with you
And it’ll take some time to patch that hole
You left in my soul
And even then the scars’ll be left as reminders4
And it hurts my heart to know the truth.
I’m all messed up inside
And I admit it cuz I don’t like to hide
Like you do.
You can hate me if you want to
That’s your choice if you choose it
But I’ll always miss you and I’ll never forget you
I’ll always miss you5
Cuz when you leave you take a bit of me with you
Even if you don’t mean to
You’ll take me with you
And it’ll take some time to patch that hole
You left in my soul
And even then the scars’ll be left as reminders6
Please tell me what you think!
Comments
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Quick edits:
how'd should be who'd
ever turning should be ever-turning
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That's all I caught, other than cuz for cause, which is short for because.
It reads like a teenager's take on love. You made this work very, very well.
Keep up the good work. : )
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True, love does take a bit of you when it is gone. For you never forget each person you will fall in love with...the thing is that that person has changed and no longer there for you to love. Life is hard like this, well expressed, well done, thanks for sharing

