* The Rogue Master – Brief Skeleton Outline * 1
The Rogue Master is like a legend. A faith a religion much like Jesus in our times.2
He was brought into this world, know one knows how. But each side wants him for there own reason. Good/evil.3
The Trouble is The Rogue Master has a part of every race inside of him. Its like he is a mole in each group. 4
When the world goes into a dark shadow, not only are the evil worried, but so are the good, and they blame the Rogue Master. 5
So despite their differences they want to work together, having one teen from each of their groups set out and find The Rogue Master.6
Who ever finds him.. keeps him of course. 7
But both sides need the rogue master to make the shadow disappear, because it works against each in there own ways8
So it is the journey of character One & character Two on a mission to track down The Rogue Master. He journeys through many races, learns skills, battles, ect.. and falls in love. In the end... the main question you will all be asking & thinking about is who is The Rogue Master.
Author notes
This is Just a brief, non conclusive draft Skeleton Plot for an upcoming novel of mine The Rogue Master : Fantasy based...
I have not yet decided on any names: And still have a lot of research to go... Please bare with me.
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This sounds really good ^^
I like the idea of there being a God that isn't the typical run
of the mill God we have today.
Great idea hehe. Keep it up yeh?
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Oh, and that picture with the red glass is awesome. Where did you get it?
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So they get to keep the Rogue Master? Like a slave? Will they force him to do this or will he willingly submit?
Perhaps there could be a logistical reason why only young people (teens) could search for him. Perhaps adults can't see him? Like after the age of 18 no one in the world can see supernatural creatures?
Great idea, though. Fantasy rocks. -
why are teens setting out to get the rogue master and not adults or champions?
do some set out as an "alliance" or are all going different routes whilst the political relations between races are getting worse (close to war/ if not war)so not only does the story switch between the youths but the going ons between races? -
humm.. I am intrigued. It will be cool to read all the different cultures and races. I like the idea of each chapter being someones trial not just a contunious story. You will have to watch though if you want to do a whole story of a persons journey in one chapter it does'nt go to long, you have to do it like:-
E.G The Rogue Master - Chapter One Part Five
--or something like that so it all coincides together.
For a rough idea I like it especially considering where you said you pulled it from! lol
Race just like religion is a fragile subject so you will have to research into each one hard so there is no controversy over one thing or another.
Try and go into more of the action than the details of the actual culture that will save on the research and the chance of any after math for what ever reason or fact.
Anyhow good start and can't wait to read it! -
brillaint idea didn't know you had the gold to set up a new one. This is very brillant. and well done.
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Interesting idea, like I said, I'll have to see where it goes from here.
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