No Feild of Daisies four - Part One- End


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Smiling she advanced towards him, His hands immersed in her hair. The smell alone, that fresh mint smell of her perfume was enough to make him melt, as she lowered her head greedily onto his fatherly hardness. 6

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Depraved as he felt, sickened inside he could no longer ignore the way his little girl was making him feel, It did not seem fair to deny himself of such a willing gratification, all in the name of love. She could never do any real harm to him, neither he to her. Then why did he feel the need to pull back, as her lips tightened hungrily over his shaft?   9

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“OH... Baby girl... We can't we really...Oh...” he moaned, as she pressed her mouth tightly over his meat, her tongue rolling, titillating his heavenly crown. 12

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She did not make a sound, only let her tongue surround his shaft, feeling the roughness, and the softness of it all. She wanted him to really feel it. Inch by inch, as the tainted pleasure grew. She wanted to make him ache for it, as she tormented him slowly, teasing him, in every way that she knew he needed to be teased. 15

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She knew her mother could never compare. She had been a frigid prune, afraid of a little excitement, and risk, always trying to convert to the traditional ways. She knew her father never really enjoyed the simple pleasures of sex. Maybe at first, but sex got boring when it was planned, predictable, painless, and not pleasurable. She knew that, and she wanted to make sure he remembered that to. 18

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“Stop denying yourself of something you know feels...Oh so right,” she said, pulling her lips painfully away from his shaft. A wicked, almost salacious gleam in her eye. 21

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Hastily she wrapped her moistened, creamy fingertips around his hardened mass of glory. Going headfirst down hard on him, her entire mouth sliding over his skin, her tongue surrounding it whole, her lips rubbing against his every alluring inch, as she delivered him into a frenzy. Savoring his rich, enticed juices. 24

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“Baby... He groaned, buckling under her tongue's passionate dance, melting under its soaking spell. He advanced forward, probing her throat with the tip of his meat, making her take it all, back far deep into the pits of desire. “Baby girl... Daddy want it... Suck harder.” 27

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Hearing his compulsive screams for more, she took him further, so far back that she felt as if she could swallow him whole. His slender body pushing her over the edge as she let one of her hands go, sliding it dangerously across the mound of his hide. Giving it a sharp tap, she felt her first kick of being in charge, her first real drive of being the boss, as she know knew she had him, She pulled all the strings now. 30

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Ruptured in torment, he thrust in and out of her mouth, ready to explode. He could feel it swelling, his creamy, pulpy sauce, ready for secretion, ready to feed her demanding hunger. 33

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Faster her mouth took back more than it could taste, she felt the rich flavor sliding down the back of her throat as he lurched, heaving his final groan. He showed her no Mercy letting his cream melt into her mouth, dripping down her thirsty lips. 36

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Suddenly, just as fast as it had started, reality returned to ruin the moment with the ringing of the downstairs phone. 39


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content is extremely taboo writing do not read if this offends you. I am not responsible for your actions. This is merely a story by reading this disclaimer you will not hold me liable for it's content.

 

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  • TNTrouble gold member
    October 3

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    Damn...this is bloody hot. Tis no way around it and no sugar coating My reaction. I find this to be very hot...


  • SeleneStone gold member
    March 10

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    Wow! Wow! Wow! Oh that's so vivid in my mind now. Damn those stupid phones. Very visual and incredibly erotic write. You left me longing for even more of this amazing piece. The way she just took over him was so seductive and this is so hot! Anxiously awaiting more
    ~Joann


  • Fizbop Greeters member
    March 9

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    I feel there are a lot of spaces in here but this is very well done and well worded. Feel like that the flow was very nice indeed.