She looked you in the eye1
And said she was fine2
While deep inside she cried3
She smiled at you 4
Making you believe her lie5
When all she wanted to do was die6
Hiding under her doona cover 7
She prayed for the day8
The pain would go away.9
One day went by 10
But for her it was11
Eternity and forever12
She smiled and laughed13
As the moments went by14
While deep inside she wanted to cry15
No one knew the hurt she held in16
As she lived day after day.17
Her lonely nights had just began 18
Because she loved someone.19
Author notes
*sigh*
[= tell me the truth... is this any good?
Comments
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I loved the flow in this... And how she was hiding her feeling all along. Good job!
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Oh my god... Wow... I just... Wow I am speechless almost. I can relate to this so much. I mean every single word hits me so hard right now, like you wouldn't believe how hard. I loved this poem so much and if this is true feelings then I am sending you a lot of hugs because I know how it feels.
~Joann
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