The Master Sculptor

Every artist was once an amateur; some stayed that way, others were mediocre, and few were brilliant.1

Harrison Taylor drew back from the tableau, critically examining the scene before him, at first from one angle, and then another.2

Almost perfect, he thought, adjusting the position of the sculpture.3

He shuffled to one side, tilting his head; the light caught the subject well, shadows contrasted nicely, and the subtle feathering in between emphasized the varying roundness of parts of the work.4

Wiping his hands on his frock, he thought about the first time he had attempted such an undertaking. He had been barely out of school; the model he had selected had been flawless. Rather, it had been he that proved imperfect; the implements foreign in his hands, the execution careless, the outcome dissatisfying.5

Over the years, he had progressed; each subject chosen with care, he made sure to use high quality tools, and the final step embarked on with precision. When he considered the journey he had taken to arrive at where he was today, it was really a continual study of expert artisanship.6

His gaze was drawn again to the timeless beauty portrayed in front of him; the hues of soft peachy pink complemented by sharp lines of crimson. A splash of cerulean blue clashed brilliantly with the sunset orange hibiscus. A sheet of licorice black cascaded from the higher plane, a wisp trailed artfully across the midline.7

His examination now focused on the props around his sculpture; at the foot lay an angel card – ‘prosperity’- its addition the unique moniker Harrison had cultivated for himself. All great artists had a style, or a signature, that made them distinctive. After nearly twenty years, and a great many reviews in the media, Harrison considered himself to be, not only a great, but also a master.8

The creation of his art transcended all other things, and without it, his life lacked depth and passion. Everything he experienced, after completing each distinct artwork, was extraordinary; a mere sandwich was the food of gods, a simple sunset the blazing gates to hell itself, even water tasted of dewed nectar.9

He ran a finger lovingly over his sculpture; the delicate textures captured truthfully in every inch, every curve, and every tone. As he lifted his hand away, a tiny amount of damp cerise came away; evidently, it was necessary that he allow further time for his masterpiece to dry.10

He retreated, collected the implements of execution, and, after cleaning them reverently, placed them inside his worn canvas bag. He gave his sculpture one, last, appreciative look. 11

Showcased against a flawless cream wall the sculpture, though lifeless, radiated the charisma of life captured in a moment. It was an ideal all artists sought; the ability to capture the essence of life and reveal its intricacies.12

Harrison bid his sculpture farewell, and departing from the display, shut the door behind him silently. He smiled with eager expectation; tomorrow his critics would rave about the recent addition to his series. 13


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The next day, Harrison retrieved his early edition newspaper with breathless anticipation. Ever since he started his journey of continual improvement, he always enjoyed reading the reviews that his critics gave him.15

Spreading the newspaper out in front of him, he grinned as he read the headline. Clearly, his sculpture had been received in the way he expected - this new work would be the talk of the city for many days to come.16

Taking a slow sip from his coffee, he relished the moment, before pushing the paper to one side. He had another sculpture to plan - another perfect artwork, another perfect murder.17

He glanced at the satisfying headline again as the morning sun streamed through his window;
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“Angel Killer Strikes Again: City Outraged”20

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He smiled; he was, indeed, a Master.22

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  • Thorn-on-the-rose
    27 minutes ago
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    ooohhhh, I like this!!the whole, 'Angel Killer Strikes Again: City Outraged' was absolutly brilliant!! great job. This was, wow, i'm speechless, this is just amazing, great job, great writing, I love it! Good luck in my contest. and WOW!!!! that's really all I can say.

    -Dani




  • cypher200
    August 16
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    Oh shit
    Pardon the language but oh shit
    Wow
    THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY THRILLING
    WOW
    One more time I'm sorry for the profanity but damn
    lol

  • This is actually the first story i read when i entered this site last month. I may have not commented then but idk. I still think this is an amazing piece filled with imagery that i adore. Thank you for entering.


  • KayZee
    July 21

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    Holy crap !
    That was so good... I'm in awe right now. *bows to greatness*
    I totally didn't expect the ending. I thought it was going to end happily... no lie !
    Anyways, I applaud you !

  • Well Done!

    Your colorful descriptions would lead me to believe that you are an artist as well as a writer. You have no flaws in any of your grammar and the plot flowed along nicely. I got halfway though and thought this guy is making a masterpiece out of a corpse (I have a dark imagination). Then I thought, nah. Look at how much detail she goes into describing this: "A splash of cerulean blue clashed brilliantly with the sunset orange hibiscus." Can't be. Then I got to the ending and loved it! Great job. You definitely have a natural flow and great talent. I will try to make it to your book signing one day when you get published!


  • Rian
    July 13
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    Yea, I really liked this one. Realized when i was reading that i had read before, but i was pleased to get to re-read it. It was just so creative and thoughtfully detailed. Carefully crafted. I simply love it.

    < previous comment...
    Bravo!!
    I enjoyed this very much. I found that i sort of 'lost time' while reading it...which is what a good story does. Thanks you for the opportunity. You're a true talent. ! (Energetic Ovation!!) ~D

    I feel exactly the same...very well done! I applaud you ten times over


    Keep writing...you're good
    Durian


  • dancindream
    June 30
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    this was really good, interestng plot
    i had fun reading it =)
    thansk for entering

  • Great twist! Very well written story with brilliant descriptions and a superb ending. Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • VioletHill
    June 12

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    O.k. I was bored at first... but I did get into it towards the end! I didn't read any errors. thank you. I had to read the ending again. Than I got it... no im not slow I just didn't get it then i got it. anywayz I loved it and i hope to see you again in some stories i read.


    -Hugh and kisses-
    Crazy Lover-Kyny-


    P.s. Thanks for entering my contest!

  • This was good

    This was good but sadly I can only pick three finalists, so sorry.


  • loyda
    June 5

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    haha wow!

    i think i have commented on this before, but i am not sure.
    just wanted to let you know this story is amazing! (only if the other 52 comments are not enough )

    good luck on all those contests!
    you are a great writer!

  • moonwriter
    June 4
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    I know I've already commented on this, but I can't help but comment again. I've read the story twice and it was amazing both times. You're an incredibly talented author with an amazing ability to tell a story.

    I could read this story a million times over and still be entranced by the creative twist. You are an extremely talented writer and I hope you one day get published. I know I'd buy your books.

  • sassykitty gold member
    May 28

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    i really like the dark twist and you really encapsulate the protagonist's mind very well by the way you describe how he fashions his 'art'. i loved this, well done.


  • whichcraft Greeters member
    May 13

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    What a twist! Here I was admiring the work of an artist as many writers and artists are and you slap me in the face with a twist ending. I love the surprise and good work. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • Rian
    May 12

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    Bravo!!

    I enjoyed this very much. I found that i sort of 'lost time' while reading it...which is what a good story does. Thanks you for the opportunity. You're a true talent. ! (Energetic Ovation!!) ~D

  • great

    yu hit a soft spot... murderers and serial killers are one of my favorite topics (my fav. person being jack the ripper) thanks for entering it.

  • This is an awesomely discriptive peice! Keep up the great worK!

  • WillyLee
    May 2

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    This guy is a true artist, although he works in an unusual medium. The act of artistic creation seems to elevate him and sharpens his senses and his appreciation for life. Unfortunately it doesn't have the same effect on his subjects. Although story is very short, everything it wants or needs is included. The final sentence is both chilling and amusing. I was smiling along with Harrison as I read it. A terrific story.


  • CactusJack silver member
    April 28

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    wow. that was awesome.
    I love your descriptions
    'a simple sunset the blazing gates to hell itself' - great imagery.
    I'm not sure I can add anymore than what was already said. The tone had almost a neurotic obsessive feel, very subtle. Almost an undertone. then the end...great twist. To be able to write a serial killer, well, is a gift in itself.
    Just out of curiosity, have you ever seen Dexter? If you like Serial killers, you'll love him.
    Back to your story, yeah it kicked ass. I'll be looking for more.

    Jack


  • jauhar
    April 26
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    I enjoy stories with a twist. They revive the reader and carries the story along smoothly

  • moonwriter
    April 25

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    Talk about a loop. I started out reading it thinking it was just a normal little story about an artist. I was so wrong. That was amazing. I had to reread it to figure out what hints I'd missed. So unpredictable. Definitely stands out!

  • keep on writing lime this!! i love it!!!! you are awesome!!!!
    xoxo
    caitlin


  • summerayne
    March 24

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    After reading this disturbing and brilliant story, I am convinced that the serial killer genre is not dead yet. I had no idea that the "sculpture was anything but, until the very end. Keep up the story!

  • Attingere
    March 24

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    Masterfully done.
    Heheheh. No pun intended. I loved the ambiguous description of Harrison's sculpture, only to re-read it and find something diffrent entirely.
    Claps for TallBlondie!

    . Rewarded 4

  • I love that song omg and it blended so well with your words.. you have done an incredible job at dispaying your imagery... I like chickens ^.^


  • AthenaWisdom
    March 23

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    Wow - this is really good! The twist at the end was unexpected, but I liked it. Good luck and keep writing!


  • Kohaku Inui
    March 21
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    Whoa....This story left me in awe! Very good!


  • moved.by.u
    March 21

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    WOW! The unexpected twist at the end was perfect. Your detail and description was amazing. It's incredible how you thought of this. Love it!

    . Rewarded 4


  • SnowRose-Wolf Greeters member
    March 21

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    I know I've already commented, but I'll comment again as you've changed the ending....

    I have to say, I kind of liked the other ending a little more.....it seemed to hit you with more shock value when you read the headline.....but maybe thats just me...

    Anyway, I still love the story

    ~Mirry xx

    P.S. forgot to say I really like the new title, I think its works better than the other one


  • hobo kiti
    March 21

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    This is interesting... but I'm tired... and this is puzzling me.

    "one, last, appreciative look. 11" take out the commas
    also, the ooooooooooooooooo? is that supposed to be a page break? use ---------------- or something else, because it looks wierd. if it's an exclamation of sorts, then, sorry, i'm just confused

    there could be more detail about what exactly he is doing to it.

    beautiful wording, however. keep all you have, but maybe add a little more to clarify?

    Like this "artist" guy. he's rad.

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