♥The Dark One Angel -Series Two- Part Ten - Final ♥

♥The Dark One Angel ♥
Series Two- Part Ten – Finish1

Darius sank his fangs deep into the child's skin. Pain erupting in his body for a few short moments before he began to feel a surge of great power running through him. His heart beat faster, his lings breathed in heightened air. 2

Something stirred in his, burned a fierce passion, as flashes of great memories seeped from within the child's mine. A great orgasmic feeling erupted in the core of his heart, sending shatters of stimulation circling through his body. It was as if for the first time since his turning, he felt alive within himself. 3

He felt the earth start to shake beneath him, a strong, fogged, gust of wind, powerfully blew through the open barnyard door, wrapping itself tightly around the two of them. Lifting them higher into the sky. The levitation, only known to occur, when in the presence of the worshiped one.4

Inky Black blood seeped from the wound in which he had created, burning like fire in his mouth. Melting its way down his throat, deep into his body. 5

“Darius, you must stop, you have already drained far to much blood,” Sin chortled, trying to see past the fog that had surrounded his partner, and the child. 6

He managed to get a glimpse through the shadows. The blood was dripped in thick amounts,from the boys open wound, as the fog slowly started to disappear, Sin gather his courage and stepped into the imaginary circle the two had around him. At once he saw the jet black puddle on the floor. puddle below them.7

“The Prophecy child,” he gasped, not believing his eyes for a second. “Darius, you must let go, it is him, it is the Prophecy child.”8

Filled to the mouth, frothing, burning, his body hungered more of the rich, and powerful. He could feel the child's weakness as he drained his last sip of blood, before pulling back, Using his hand to close conceal the wound.9

He let go of the boy, as the fog disappeared, and there bodies were lowered from levitation. Darius felt empowered, the surge of great electrical energy seemed to send him into delirium, before reality sank in, and the truth lay rested, limpid and frozen in front of him.10

Sunken in panic, Sin looked to the ground, clutching the boy in his arms. It was clear to him that Darius had drained to much blood, and if not careful they could loose him to a cold death. There mere existence would be over. There race would soon die out.11

“What have you done? You have become a hungry beast Darius, could you not heed my warning, he is the child, could you not see his ebony blood as it seeped from the wound you created? Did you not look as you drained him almost into death, you must give him back some of his blood before it is to late, the fate of out kind, and his kind to now lay rested in your hands.”12

Startled with little patience, Darius wiped his swollen, hungry lips of his sleeve. Tossing his hair behind his shoulders, as he knelled down beside them, wrapping his warmth around the two.13

“Patience Sin, all in good timing, it is how the ritual must go,” Darius said firmly, making a small clean cut in his wrist, lowering it painful to the boys mouth. He watched, feeling to hot, slow breathing of the boy on his skin, before the boy, swiftly and sharply dug his fangs into his skin.14

Hungrily the boy drank, lapping, consuming his own blood, mixed with the strong, potent blood of Darius, his turner. The exchange left them kindred, forever they would be locked together, for eternity, as the exchange left the prophecy blood running thick within his veins.15

Darius pulled back, ripping his skin, as the hungry child, sat upright. Licking his blackened lips, clicking his tongue in a rhythmic fashion. He grinned peacefully at Darius, extending his hand, and rested it upon his shoulder, breathing in the fear in his eyes.16

“What am I,” he asked Darius, his eyes penetratingly deeply within his. 17

Darius shivered, rising to his feet. He knew that from now on, the truth remained that they were all in great danger now that he had turned, and released the child onto there world. He was not only one of them, a creature of the night, but one with the greatest power of all. The chosen one, a myth no more, a legend uncovered right before their eyes. 18

From the moment they had exchanged blood the defining line between master, and slave had been established. The prophecy child had awakened, they now bowed down to him. It was up to them to keep him safe from harms way, to guide him, and protect him so that he could lead them into a better existence.19

Darius searched the boys eyes, kneeling before him, holding his own wound as it healed my the heat of his skin.20

“You are an Angel, you are a creature of the night, the undead, you are the most feared creature that walks this earth, amongst mortals, vampires, all all creatures that surround us all. You are powerful, more powerful then us all put together. Your blood runs thick, with the legend of the prophecy child, the one that will lead us out of the darkness and into a better light of existence. Your life is not in our hands any longer, we will serve you, you are our king, but our lives, all of our lives are in you hands. For you are not just a simple vampire, you are not just any creature like the rest of us, you are far more than that. You are the dark one, The leader, our savior, you are the Dark One Angel.”21

♥End Of Series Two ♥

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♥The Dark One Angel ♥

The end of series Two :LOOK out for series Three ... which will come in a few weeks time most likely, Once I finish up on a few other stories...

I kinda hoped I finished it well...with that not quite finished feel, but the feeling of wanting to know more...needing to know more..yet being provided with the basics.

Thank you for reading this series - I look forward to writing the next.

Love
~P.M~
Blair

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  • MoonRoseWolf gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Superb!

    This was incredibly vivid. There was the odd spelling and grammer mistake, but nothing that would really distract the reader.
    This was very well written and thought out, and the pace was kept evenly throughout.
    Well done, and good luck in the contest!


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    March 8, 2008

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    Wow! This was a perfect ending to the second series. I loved how vivid it all was and how they explained to him exactly what he was. Great job on this series! Can't wait for more.
    ~Joann

  • V l
    March 7, 2008

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    Great ending I love this last part it was like a dark pome.
    “You are an Angel, you are a creature of the night, the undead, you are the most feared creature that walks this earth, amongst mortals, vampires, all all creatures that surround us all. You are powerful, more powerful then us all put together. Your blood runs thick, with the legend of the prophecy child, the one that will lead us out of the darkness and into a better light of existence. Your life is not in our hands any longer, we will serve you, you are our king, but our lives, all of our lives are in you hands. For you are not just a simple vampire, you are not just any creature like the rest of us, you are far more than that. You are the dark one, The leader, our savior, you are the Dark One Angel.”21


  • Hermanator1 silver member
    March 7, 2008

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    Good conclusion

    It wraps up the segment appropriately and clearly sets the stage for the battles to come.
    A lot of errors in the beginning as I suspect your fingers were having trouble keeping up with your mind. Many misspellings were the problems.

    beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • ScarsNDepth
    March 7, 2008
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    Sweet as always! Cant wait for part three!


  • DarkOneShadow
    March 7, 2008

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    mmm... a nice ending

    This is getting good, though I wonder if series three is going to be about Marie and him or about his rise to power... hmmm

    Great job overall, sweetie. A masterpiece!

    DarkOne

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