the LONG night with two men: PART 3

I awoke to the angry face of my landlord. he began to yell telling me my rent is two weeks over due. it was not my fault.
i had been sick that week and forgot to give the money to him, but he kept yelling.1

so i dropped to my knees and began to cry. the tires fell like crazy off of my cheeks. he did not care. i looked over to get a opinion from Josh. he sat in the corner with his hands over his ears trying to block out of noise pollution.2

i could not take it any more. so i dove at him with my mouth open and ready to latch on to what ever peace of flesh was available. it was his leg; which makes sense considering his height. he began to twitch and kick all over my floor, knocking over lambs and vases.  i was terrified.3

i was sure that me and Josh were goners. we would never have another night with Mr. Hungsolow again when...4

TO BE CONTINUED5

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Author notes

the adults in our story have gotten into some trouble. will they start acting there age?

has it ever happened to you?

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  • HopeForUnity
    December 8, 2008
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    there are a few spelling mistakes... but other than that, this was quite rivetting.
    please write more
    well done

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