My Baby, My Jack

Walking towards me,
But I knew he's going farther.
My baby,
My Jack.1

He's not home and
Not eating,
Is what my Grandpapa
said.2

Then they moved
And I got him back.
My baby,
My Jack.3

I don't know why it had to happen
My baby,
I don't know why...
But I'll miss you forever & ever always.4

My kitty,
My cat.
My baby,
My Jack.

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Dedicated to: Tiah's "baby" Jack, now in Kitty heaven; and to all those who have a "baby" of their own...

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  • amanda vampiress silver member
    September 15, 2008

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    This was very sweet and cute! Sorry for you and your friends loss of baby Jack! I liked the little rhyme within the poem, unless there isn't one. lOls oh well, i liked it either way! *thumbs up*


    • Namoopf
      September 15, 2008
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      Yeah,I guess there is kind of a ryhme, lol


  • XxZha-GirlxX
    June 11, 2008
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    Aww^^

    That was cute. I'm sorry about your loss.


  • UnEdibleChick
    March 15, 2008

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    Awww! I'm so sorry for your cat! I don't have a "Baby" But I have a dog and a rabbit. Thanks for entering. Good luck and keep up the good work.


  • Namoopf
    March 11, 2008
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    OMG

    My baby's famous!!!!! I knew he was special, but GOSH!!!!

    • Namoopf
      March 12, 2008
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      Tiah...

      I was not the one to write the OMG comment, I just wanted to show her the poem (Tiah, of course. its dedicated to her and her cat and yea) =D

      So she was on my account and all...

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