Walking towards me,
But I knew he's going farther.
My baby,
My Jack.1
He's not home and
Not eating,
Is what my Grandpapa
said.2
Then they moved
And I got him back.
My baby,
My Jack.3
I don't know why it had to happen
My baby,
I don't know why...
But I'll miss you forever & ever always.4
My kitty,
My cat.
My baby,
My Jack.
Author notes
Dedicated to: Tiah's "baby" Jack, now in Kitty heaven; and to all those who have a "baby" of their own...
A contest entry
- Poetry and short stories by UnEdibleChick.
315 points, ended April 8, 2008, 29 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was very sweet and cute! Sorry for you and your friends loss of baby Jack! I liked the little rhyme within the poem, unless there isn't one. lOls oh well, i liked it either way! *thumbs up*

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Yeah,I guess there is kind of a ryhme, lol
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Aww^^
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Awww! I'm so sorry for your cat! I don't have a "Baby" But I have a dog and a rabbit.
Thanks for entering. Good luck and keep up the good work.


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OMG
My baby's famous!!!!! I knew he was special, but GOSH!!!! -
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Tiah...
I was not the one to write the OMG comment, I just wanted to show her the poem (Tiah, of course. its dedicated to her and her cat and yea) =D
So she was on my account and all...
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