Heavy Breathing

He was 25 and I was 19…it was love…it had to be…I had never seen a guy this turned on!!…every movement I made, made him gasp even louder…so I went for it!…you know…quickened the pace etc . he was at the stage where he couldn’t speak…all I could hear were his panting breaths…it was then that I realised…..he was having an asthma attack.1

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  • J Rhys Davies
    December 22, 2004
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    You’re right Susan, this is just what the doctor ordered. I am sitting here laughing. leanne, you are a nut and a half. I thought this was just too flipping funny!!!

    ~ John


  • SusanL
    December 22, 2004
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    I was thinking this was wrongly classified until the end! you are too too funny. you give us the truly unexpected without being over the top!
    I am still giggling at this one...
    Susan


  • Lady Patricia
    December 18, 2004
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    OH MY JESUS CHRIST!
    that's terrible and hilarious al at one time. ^_^ I totally hadnt expected that! Not at all! OMG I so hope you win!!! Becuase I love this write, you are now on my favorites baby.
    trish

  • macandrew
    December 7, 2004
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    very funny

    Very funny, must have been love.

    thanks,
    John


  • angelica
    December 7, 2004
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    Leanne, oh this is so funny my sweet, I am still chuckling over it. Oh dear and she thought he was panting for her LOL Love~Joan

  • leannewales
    December 6, 2004
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  • unsexypenguin
    December 6, 2004
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    When I first started reading this I was kinda like hmmmm it's a little short, but damn, this is so funny. I couldn't picture this happening to me. At least you know that you're good enough to give him an asthma attack? I don't know, I'm not good at comforting people. I couldn't help but laugh my ass off at this. This is amazing. Thank you so very much for entering.
    Edited on Dec 06, 9:27 p.m. because ''.


  • wattle
    December 6, 2004
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    Ms Wales, your experiences (or your mind) have made you what you are ---- this is lots of fun --- (I think he was faking - Guys do it all the time) - thank you.

  • Annabel Lee
    December 6, 2004
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    Lol, this is a hilarious story. And I can relate to it! Haha. I had this happen to me with my old boyfriend. Sorry about him having an asthma attack though. Great story.

  • queenie
    December 6, 2004
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    you don't know how funny this is to me.i have asthma and this happened to me.my partner was so sure he was taking me to the brink of ecstasy and all i was trying to do was breath.this is too funny to me.

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