River

I was walking down at the river banks with my friend Jill. I feel bad about not letting Dan come with us. We always go down there after school. I felt weak after school, I was mad at Dan, and I don't think that Jill was so happy with me either.1

I was feeling quite strange, my heart was quvering, and I felt like I had a lump in my stomach. I just felt like something was going to happen. Something bad. I looked at my reflection in the riverbank, hoping not to see someone else staring back at me. It was just me feeling sick, weird, and way too quite.2

"Sarah!" I heard someone call, my name, but it wasn't jill. "SARAH!!!" I heard again. I look around, saw no one next to me. Then I turned around. I saw, Dan in the water I ran to get him out. But, when I got near his hand he was gone.3

Why would I think about something like that. I care about my friends, I wouldn't want anything bad to happen to anyone of them. I wouldn't even wish that on someone I hated.4

"Sarah?"5

"yeah?"6

"Are you okay" Jill asked with a weird look on her face. "you, look like you just saw a ghost or something."7

"I think I did."8

The next day, I walked up to Dan and forgave him. He still doesn't know why, but I will not let him near the river. I am so glad that nothing happened to him. Who knows if he came that day with me and Jill, he might have really been in that river. I am so glad that he is still here!9

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I am so glad that he is still here.

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