Inhumane1
Is that really 2
What I am3
Is it4
Inhumane5
To want6
Something7
That helps people8
Pure9
If everyone is pure10
Nobody can be11
Forced to prove12
Themselves13
Because they are14
Not as pure15
As those around16
Inhumane17
Is what he18
Calls me19
Why20
I am saving21
The human race22
He is destroying it23
What is wrong24
With the way25
I think26
Inhumane27
Killing Muggles28
Is wrong29
According to him30
If muggles 31
Are so good32
Then why33
Was I scorned34
Hated35
Mistreated36
Because of my mother37
Inhumane38
I killed him39
My father40
They said 41
That was wrong42
But why43
He left 44
Mother45
Because of who she was46
What she was47
Is that not inhumane48
I am only49
Making things right50
Is that 51
Inhumane52
If so 53
Then 54
I like 55
Being56
Inhumane57
Author notes
my favorite kind of dog is a maltese shitzu (i think its the dog my best friend has and its puffyish and adorable)
A contest entry
- Whatcha Feel Like. by lovableReese.
510 points, ended March 12, 2008, 33 entries
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Comments
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Hmmm... very unique as far as how you spaced and ended lines. It is very creative and I admire that, it's like you really thought out and took the time to create a wonderful poem. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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I liked this. Well done. Kais =)
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this was a nice poem. Different but nice. Great Job.
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wow cool poem a different way to write poetry ^^ cool dude inhuman is all around us
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