Why don't you just throw yourself against a door, you unloving, uncaring, thing! I'm tired of this, day and night, week and weekend; you're there, rapping against my windowpane, keeping me awake at night. It's got to end, soon, before it goes too far. I'm sure you don't want me to be the end, do you? Just go ahead, speak it softly on my deaf ear.1
Your whispers will have no effect to my unchanging mind and heart. Your touch, no longer gentle, scrapes skin off of its bones, but how I wish YOUR bones were exposed. I'd break them all, into tiny little shreds, to be left for the dogs.2
Why don't you just swim the nearest ocean, let the sharks eat at your flesh. Let the dolphins reject your wet-suit that keeps you dry. Oh, but how it'll keep you cold; cold like you always seem to treat me.3
Okay, so now it's your turn.4
"You think I'm evil, don't you? Answer my questions, you ignorant, despiteful, no-good-for-nothing witch! I'll squash your pumpkin head into that concrete, if you don't listen to me. You're nothing but hateful. Why do I stand this? I don't know, maybe to treat you a lesson!"5
Ha! Hateful, ignorant, despiteful, even a good-for-nothing-witch I suppose? Na, I don't think so. 6
Look at your words, go ahead, look at them carefully. Study them; say them over and over in your head.7
Now eat them!
Author notes
This isn't necessarily in letter form, but it's a letter. There's no one in particular too, or anyone in particular it's from, and adding the Dear _____; Sincerily _______, blah stuff would just take away from the rage of the story.
***for the worst story ever contest: why? because this story really doesn't have a plot, or characters or anything that really makes it a story, but yet it is a story.
A contest entry
- Dramatic Letter Contest by Melissa Loves Jeffy.
350 points, ended April 16, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - We want your worst story! by DoozerDan.
710 points, ended April 16, 2008, 19 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
So...
Comments
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I liked your letter but I felt that you were holding back somehow. I didn't feel the rage or intensity I am sure you were trying to get across. Maybe if you targeted the letter to something that was close to you. Good luck in the contest.
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This has alot of emotion and I can tell you felt good venting. Good job and good luck in the contest. Thanks for entering!!
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Edgy
I felt it was just sort of out there. That is to say it seemed like and apex of sound and fury signifying nothing. Rage without purpose is very bland. Try focusing it in your writing with a unique purpose. Otherwise it will sound unkempt and childish.
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